Saturday, July 19, 2008
((( WONDERING THOUGHTS)))
As i sit my brain starts to think
Thoughts twirl inside my head
Until i can no longer think.....
I decide to move around to
Find myself lost in confusion
I then wonder and start to
Have illusions.......
By now my heart is beating
Faster, Oh dear here goes
My thoughts, good thoughts
I hope.......
But find myself wanting to
Drop, but i pull myself
Together and tell myself
Nope........
Thats when i know there
Is (( HOPE )).........
Well i hope you guys have enjoyed this little poem....
Thought i would give it a try since i have enjoyed
Reading so many poems from others!!!!
HUGS AND BLESSINGS TO YOU ALL*.*.*.*.
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11 comments:
good peom. I'd try but that last time I tried that it was a disaster. I wrote better stuff when I was a teen.
Hugs and Blessings. That is my tale and I'm sticking to it!
Hey Mike, i know what you mean.
I use to do poems all the time
when i was a teen too....
I thought what the heck, i would
give it a try. and you know i had
fun doing it!!!
Thank for liking it.
HUGS AND HUGS TO YOU,
Love,Stacy
Great poem sis. Hugs you big time.
Wonderful poem...thanks for sharing it with us.
You know, there is such a difference in what is written from the heart and what is written just for the praise of others.... There is a spirit that goes with words from our hearts........ It knows no space or time.... I love to read things that open my eyes to the heart of the writer........ You have shared a bit of you heart here sweetie!
Thank you all, I was just having a little bit of fun with this....
Tracy, i hope you are doing better by now? And how is the prints coming along? Miss you a lot and will let you know when things take place with my son.......
HUGSSSS AND HUGSSSSS TO YOU!!!!
Love,Stacy
very pretty poem...keep up the good work...
I love poems about HOPE!They keep us going. ((((Hugs))) Wanda
Thank you Mimi and Wanda!
I'm glad you both liked it, just a little something on how i feel...
Hugs and Blessings to you both!!!
Love,Stacy
Stacy,
How wonderful to open your blog and find your poem. You expressed your feelings very beautifully and eloquently. Keep it up - I want to read more!
Hugs,
Tamara
Tamara!
Glad you enjoyed it....
Short and simple. I will have to do it more often, cause it did seem to help my feelings through this.
HUGS AND HUGS TO YOU!!!!!
Love,Stacy
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